My thoughts
start with 10 points.
-1 it just didnt make me want to move which is the reason i love dance
-1 the ending is well sounded like a dieing computer
-1 dance is like techno this is almost all guitars this is like a hybrid of dance and rock
+1 for talking! ive been trying 2 find some1 tat would talk and here we go!
so 8/10 and 4/5