except for the freakin cursing. -.- I loved the way you used the vocals but please, do the exact thing except no swearing, c'mon. anyways I'm not gonna rate as low as angel down ter but ya those words greatly hurt my rating.
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So the pelican flew over 4 hills?
you are so gonna win XD man I personally tink ur teh best person on this website
pretty much the whole time i was dancin in my chair XD
sirtom93, I find your review shallow and pedantic
Nah jk, but that intro was awesome.
Since I make songs I will review this from two different viewpoints
Listeners viewpoint: Kinda repetitive and didn't really wow me
A music makers view: based on my experience it's hard just to do this. although it could use some variation and slight more heart its still better than my work.
I averaged my two scores to get 8/10 4/5. No that I'm done being an idiot I will say good job *takes off hat*
Hey thanks for the awsome review! And yeah im sorry for the repetitive nature of my song since i like the melody so much i couldnt help myself. Just like F-777 top5 song its also repetitive still fun to hear and i love it! Because the melody is sooo catchy. Guess i had the sane issue here but im also glad you saw the song in two view pionts a lot of people dont do that.
Thanks for the review and liking my intro :)
Only advice, add more of those small vocals. and also at the ned the sound suddenly went up for a millisecond. might wanna fix that.
its supposed 2, for the end. and yeh once i get my computer back =]
Please tell me
Were did u get her lines? I want to do something like this so please tell me. please please please..and I like the song but personally for my own taste it is pretty slow.
not wat i expected
i expected the still alive song from portal but still this was epic. I love how well Lira is! Ill b lucky if i ever get half as good as that.
Allo Gibbly Gooba!
anyways im not the classical man myself but i have to say.... this was tons better than my first XD unfortunately I can't give any advice on personal experience cuz u did wat i learned in 3 songs. My only advice is that make it more upbeat(thats if you like the music like dance and techno). so since I dont have any REAL things to go against your work...ima vote 10/10 5/5
Thanks for the review
gotta be honest
I really didn't like the beat at some parts. Some parts I liked the beat but usually not. I LOVE the fact that you actually made a song that has some lyrics. Finally the part at the end were everyting just morphed into like a glop...i liked that too.
overall: beat was pretty bad but everything else was pretty good.
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